Just spent another few hours editing banters.
Talked with jcompton for a while about them yesterday, he revised a few, I revised a few...
Today's toll: 20-odd revised and tightened, 7 axed, 2 roughed out.
The revised ones, by the way, are much improved, much tighter, livelier, and more suited to characters.
For the moment, though, I'm beat. Time to head to the library for the weekly concert series and maybe a bit of html practice (Yes, I'm trying to learn to make web pages. It seemed time).